My Essay
He and her
Augmented and ample my-self emotions would seem to be. I, rather
to say, afforded many a gracious symptom towards my life to have it joyful and
enjoyable. A girl has taken my heart that was rightly reserved to my dear Mom,
away to her unknown destination. What made me pride and proud of having my
heart been stolen from my soul-house is her being very likely strong,
emotional, and caring a person.
As a matter of luck and coincidence , I came
to know her from close;was she able to glance at my eyes to fetch for special
inward feelings, she would dare to talk to me, smile at me and rightly gaze at
me. However, I did dare to make it happen, though dim a way was it.Dim it was
as she might have seen it in so clear a manner it appeared to me, for I believe
in being different and as special as she is. I consider Nachwa the
self-indulgent, encouraging and proudly superb being in her strong attitudes.
She, Nacho as I got used to calling her, gave me a sense of diving in such a
deep ocean, risky and profound it is, that likely was I to dive and drown in.
The ocean of love is highly considered a preferable area of entertainment and
fun.
My YOU-ness began to rebuke my odd updated
characters that I had decided to go over in my life but Nacho with her essence
of hilarious, sad and happy, and sophisticatedly likeable emotions of love and
the want to adventure again in, non-merciful, highly probable to die in, the love
ocean. I wholeheartedly prefer to be in only if she wants to since her absence
leaves the ocean sad and willing to tear so much water that would enclose us
and to make us fear death.
Were I to know her in person before the now, I,
pretending to be, arrogant and braggadocious not to her but for her. Looking at
my posts on Facebook, reading my sayings, attending my activities at both of
the school and the corner, she cares about me. Likewise I, with my-self-special
manners, outdo her caring though I seem carefree. What makes my deeds, dim
beings to be, look unfamiliar is the accumulation of hard work, less time for
joy and love. In a sense, I shall apologise for being alike, which, I
ascertain, is rightly right for us to be gratified with such a potential abnormal
course of together life. And, surely I acclaim, for my status to make it more
superb than all.
I should
come to close my humble free writing in the hope to let you know the tips of
saying, 'He and her'. Since I believe in our togetherness, I have chosen the
'h' of 'honey' I dream to have in being with you, assuring your inside over
your outside. Albeit in England we say, 'ladies first', I counteract to this
for I believe in myself to preserve you in my warm protection. At last but
never is this the least, I opted for 'He' to reflect on myself as a normal
case, however, Nacho is referred to as' her' with a lower case 'h' that never
stands without me and a 'her' pronoun that reflects her possession of several
lovely senses of living especially towards Nani.
What I most like in this piece of writing is the strong diction and the power of structures that have been used.
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DeleteMerci bcp
DeleteI enjoyed reading this essay, it's amazing. Thanks and good luck
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it and looking forward to your contribution on my blog
DeleteWaww it's amazing hamza just go ahead and move on may Allah bless u , and don't forget
ReplyDeleteEverything comes to him , who waits 😍😍😍
#Your_classmate "Widad"
It is an excellent piece of writing. I do really enjoy reading it. Best regards bro.
ReplyDeleteI do feel proud and happy about those young writers that are coming up, YOU in particular, who diligently made a plethora of sincere endeavours before you got the opportunity to make moonlight. MY Friend, without commitment you'll never start but more importantly without consistency you'll never finish. It's not easy MY Friend; if it were easy there would be no Shakespeare, no Jane Austin, no Agatha Christy, no Hemingway, no Kantinglish; but not only that, if it were easy there would be no NANI HAMZA. So keep working, keep striving, never give up. Fall down seven times, get up eight. And bear in mind that ease is a greater threat to progress than hardship.
ReplyDeleteCan you guess who I AM?
I guess you are a friend who so often pushed me forth. In good times and in bad times it was friendship the remained the same, it never will it be broken up. I could feel the sense of wisdom from your words and I could notice the mixture of honesty and manly state. You are who you are and since names are just given by parents to demonstrate our existential in the terrain I am, less care about marginality, less keen to know your name. Your stand makes me keen to have you a friend of mine.
DeleteI guess you are a friend who so often pushed me forth. In good times and in bad times it was friendship the remained the same, it never will it be broken up. I could feel the sense of wisdom from your words and I could notice the mixture of honesty and manly state. You are who you are and since names are just given by parents to demonstrate our existential in the terrain I am, less care about marginality, less keen to know your name. Your stand makes me keen to have you a friend of mine.
DeleteI guess you are a friend who so often pushed me forth. In good times and in bad times it was friendship the remained the same, it never will it be broken up. I could feel the sense of wisdom from your words and I could notice the mixture of honesty and manly state. You are who you are and since names are just given by parents to demonstrate our existential in the terrain I am, less care about marginality, less keen to know your name. Your stand makes me keen to have you a friend of mine.
Deleteجميل جدا صديقي حمزة، قصة حب انت بطلها ههههه
ReplyDeleteبالتوفيق صديقي حمزة
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It's just wow man, I like your way of writing and the use of words, keep on that my friend.Good luck.
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing ..i like it ..good luck bro
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